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The Most Beautiful Art

byCndrlla69©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/02/13

Very good story

YOu focused on the mental and spiritual pleasures of first making love and that is better than just focusing on the physical. Loved your story

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by Erotonaut04/02/13

Nicely done

Jake's clearly a considerate lover. Carly's a very lucky girl.

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by memorable_event04/02/13

Excellent

I really like your writing style and realistic scenes you paint with words. Very well done.

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by Anonymous04/04/13

Wonderful!

This story is so well written and vivid descriptions keep you enthralled...love it!

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by Anonymous04/08/13

Brilliantly written and very erotic well done!

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by sactofunseeker08/22/13

Awesome story

Another great story that aroused me and drew me in. Very well written.

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by Privates1stClass08/26/13

Nearly perfect

When I read the first paragraph, I was hooked--and it just got better from there. Even though the story is short, you've captured the necessary details to make it a great story.

Was this a Earth Day contest entry? If not, it should have been. Thanks for posting.

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