by theravenfox
God this was so hot! I got so wet I've soaked through my panties! I can't wait to hear more!!!
You got me so damn hard that story was hot! Can't wait for another story from you!
That was so steamy, very erotic and had me cumming again and again,.
Who knew BDSM could be so fun...
Loved the story Raven! Great content, good characters, and you really did a nice job with the format and voice flow. Could have done with a few less birds, but it was Earth Day after all! All that...and I'm very wet waiting for the Sheriff's turn. :). Great job!
How do you always get me so fucking hard I swear my wife is going to hate me tonight fuck out of her mind thank you
5 Stars! I loved this story and hope you add more like it. Are you against non-consent type stories where the victim is less cooperative and not as naive?
liked it ..another good one by you but it could be better with less background noise .. anyway 5star from me .. thank you.
Great story and even better was the format you used to tell it. Hats off to you and keep them cumming!!
I absolutely loved this story. It got me so hot and Trista reminded me of Sookie in True Blood.
5 Stars! I loved this story and hope you add more like it. Are you against non-consent type stories where the victim is less cooperative and not as naive?
I love Justified and the Ellen May story arc. You really did a great job of captured her speech patterns and, well, ignorance. I would love another audio story featuring characters from that world.
I just love the clueless Ellen May, and that you included a male voice. Very entertaining with a touch of humor. I would have loved to hear some moaning from the two men as well. Great job. Thanks.
Dylan, my velvet-voiced fantasy man...PLEASE make us a new audio! I need the inspiration, darlin'. :)
This audio placed somewhere around 15th (out of 63 stories) in the Literotica Earth Day contest. That's pretty darn good, especially for the only audio entered into the contest! Thank you all for your votes, comments and encouragement. This was a fun audio to make and your response makes recording erotic audios SO much fun. Keep listening!
The story is good and the voice overs are brilliant. Loved the officers voice, there is something really sexy about the sound. Well done by all. Can't wait to hear more.
The story was well written and acted and Trista's revelation at the end was deftly handled, and even had me chuckling. I didn't get as much out of it in terms of arousal for most of the recording as I have from your other audio stories. Even though I knew it was supposedly a nonconsent story, I was still a little too disturbed by the actual sounds of Trista's struggles to service her supposed captors.
Your very convincing job of conveying her lack of sophistication took some of the fun out of it. It reminded me too much of someone enjoying shooting sitting ducks or "fishing" with dynamite
My problem, not yours.
This was the first audio story that I actually liked this much. I wish more of them were acted out like this instead of just telling a story. I will look for more of your stories
I want to see what happens,although with a voice like the sheriff's I wouldn't want to leave the office at all.
That was one of the most exciting, amazing, hot stories I've ever heard. It has humor, intensity, an excellent plot... and what's better it's done in such a professional way It's a pleasure to listen to it.
I look forward to find many more audios like this ... I would rate it to a 6 stars if I could !!
This was amazing!! I loved it. Please do more that could be enjoyed by female listeners. :3
I usually think the text audio part of literotica is shit but this is amazing!!!
I was afraid that I would ease time listening to this story, but it was both funny and erotic.I have never liked literotica audio stories. This totally changed my mind. I thought the nature sounds were a bit loud , but the rest of the samba text excellent it eventhe parts of the plot that I didn't like very much were so well done that I have nothing bad to say about them. I hope you won the competition.
It was an amusing story, the voice acting was excellent as always, but the nature sounds were WAY to loud.
I swear it felt like i was in the forest with you. Amazing sounds, I only wish I got to hear the guys more.
This was so professionally done it was like listening to one of those old radio plays, but erotically charged, outstanding.
By the amount of pre-cum the leaked from my dick while reading this story, I give you ten out of ten!!! I fond it a great story, well written and nicely drawn out so that it didn't all happen too quickly. Please give us another account. I like the bondage part, - that really turned me on!!
Leo, - Brsibane Australia. E-mail address if you wish to reply is <bondpleasure@outlook. com> . I would love to hear from you.
Really enjoyed this story - I live near the Mt. Hood National Forest - and the semi-consensual aspect was fun because it wasn't rape - she REALLY wanted to join BDSM! I must note, however, that the background noise was too loud and didn't really sound like the forest at all - too many bird noises. But your voice is so marvelous. Thanks!
I enjoyed it, but the nature sounds and birds more often overpowered some of you dialogue. Especially most of Corrine's words. I have some slight synesthesia, so trying to hear what she was saying around the loud pangs and eruptions of color I was getting from the birds was... Well, the birds were very distracting to say the least.
I really enjoyed your story. Loved the ditzy girl. Some back ground noises were loud at times but still enjoyed it. I am also from the south and would love to find you and put you through initiation. I'm sure I could make you earn a spanking.
Love your stories and your username. Ravens are the best. Fellow oregon resident? Googled the number in the story, resturant on burnside
Thank you.
Hello. Being from Oregon and knowing the Pacific Northwest like the back of my hand made this one really special. I thought this was brilliant, very creative, fun, and very well written. It was like listening to a story over a radio show with the characters. Now I will admit that the nature sounds were a little over powering yet at the same time they made me remember how some of the early radio shows were a little off in the audio which made them fun. The responses from the sheriff and her talking to him had me laughing my ass off because of how gullible Trista might have seemed to him. She in my opinion had him fooled she was just some ditzy southern lady in distress yet she was getting turned on turning that sheriff on. You have my 5 star vote I would give you 10 stars if possible. Hopefully there is a second part or more adventures with the character of Trista.