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The Hikers

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/05/13

I want to join this hiking club!

Maybe we could all go camping together next.

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by Anonymous04/10/13

Let's go hiking...

I love how detailed they are. I could imagine it was me pinching and twisting her nipples!

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by Anonymous04/12/13

Fuck me too!

This was one hot fucking story that got to the fucking point right now!!! My cock was hard as a rock two paragraphs in and stayed that way until I had filled a kleenex with cum twice! This is a fucking hot fuck story!

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by Anonymous04/15/13

Great buildup

I liked that you put enough backstory in to set up the tension and desire but then still got them naked and on each other quickly. I'd like a bit more detail in your descriptions of the action but overall I came hard by the end and will be back to re-read this one again. Hot.

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by Aunay04/15/13

Thanks for the feedback!

I love knowing if, when and exactly how successful I have been at exciting the reader. Keep the details up!

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