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- Muscle and Music Ch. 04
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All Comments on 'Muscle and Music Ch. 04'
by domiroa
- 22 Comments
Anonymousabout 11 years agoSOOOOO GOOD! can't wait for the next chapter! they're sooo cute together. I am enjoying your story immensely :)
sweetallisabout 11 years agoPlain cruel to make it that short..pleeeeease more SOON!
Truly enjoying this story!
Anonymousabout 11 years agoSo stinking short! What's the deal with that? Can't wait for the next chapter!
Anonymousabout 11 years agoThis story is just starting to get really good. I love emotions, the anticipation, and the passion in this story. Please, please, please update soon!!!
Anonymousabout 11 years agoI like the contrast between the characters, and the dynamic you have going on between them - keep it up, and please don't be too long with the next chapter!
Anonymousabout 11 years agoThis story is beautiful! i love the characters and the story is so interesting. Please post more soon.
Anonymousabout 11 years agoThis story is freaking fantastic! I love how you incorporate two completely different people to illustrate how no one cannot help who they fall in love with, but it still ends up being beautiful! Can't wait for the next installment!
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoWhat r u waiting for,hell 2 freeze over.please post another chapter...maaybe 3of em
Anonymousover 10 years agoI love this story and have been waiting anxiously for more. Please dont leave this story incomplete, your an awesome writer and I want to hear more from you. :)
Anonymousover 10 years agoplease please please more chapters,your fans need more,you have us hooked with these two beautiful characters.
nuckin1futsnixover 10 years agoHow could anyone in good conscience! do this to us the faithful readers?
oh my god i had a moment there. this was sooooooooo good. If it were a book with tangible pages, i would rip it out and eat it to make it all last longer. More more more more!!!
Roraover 10 years agoI died laughing at nuckin1futsnix! I too want to consume this just to make it last longer. This story is great. I love Vaughn's character! Glad Laurie's POV was added.
Anonymousabout 10 years agoI have read this a hundred times and can't wait for the next chapter! Please keep writing!
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoI loved the story so far, but there NEEDS TO BE ANOTHER CHAPTER! You can't leave us hanging like this! This story made my day :)
Anonymousover 8 years agothis is one captivating story you are creating and I can't get enough of it. I can't wait for the next chapter to see if Vaughn realizes that is his heart that leads the way or her continued to try to ignore Laurie and Laurie actually take what is his.
Anonymousover 7 years agoPlease keep the story going! I've added this to my favorites list and can't wait for the next chapters -- and that is definitely plural!
Anonymousover 6 years agoI see you titled this chapter "Culmination" and were it not for that I, like all the other commenters, would be begging you to continue and finish the story. But I suspect that this is as finished as you intend for it to be. It is very erotic. In fact, I cannot think of a more erotic story considering the level of intimacy achieved. I am sorry to see that you have not written again. If you are not going to continue this story (and even if you are), I believe I speak for all your readers when I say that we would love to see another submission from you. You are certainly a very good writer.
Gybbsover 5 years agoWhy do I see so much of myself and my Crush in this story ... except that Crush and I have never kissed (and perhaps the moment for that is past). Please write more - your talent is too great to go unused.
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