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May to December Earth Day Romance

byJuanVato©
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by Anonymous

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by perseygoddess04/06/13

Petered off a little at the end

I think it could have used more of a closing but great story

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by YDB9504/06/13

Great job

Nice setting, good characterization, and the sex was well-presented. Keep it up!

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by Anonymous04/12/13

Can't say this is the best contest story I have read.

Mind you this is the only one i have read. I will read some more then say this is the best.
I loved the idea didn't love the immature writing style till I realised this was a young teens' narration.
I hope there will be more.
Thank you.

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