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Anonymousabout 11 years agoStopped me in my tracts
Good scenario and strong beginning. Should pay attention to punctuation and misuse of homonyms. Use a proofreader or editor. Looking forward to more from promising author.
Jackspeed2ualmost 11 years agoBad bad bad grammar.
Bad grammar. Mixed up sentences, possibly from cut and pasting. Descriptions that don't make sense. I lasted 12 lines.
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