All Comments on 'Sensual Overlaod'

good lead in lines,

a good rule of thumb

avoid the word "passion" like the plague, generally leads to dumbness

if this case not fatal, just not good

Overlaod? typo?

The rest of it sustains a good read.

and a husky voice... The poet's one and yours :)

Love this one (as you know)

I love the way you use the sweet taste of the confectionary, and mix it with hers.

liked it

Fingerlicking good and brilliant as the dawn!

Peter