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erectus123almost 11 years agoAuthorthanks todd, maybe the set up is too long
it is the kind of thought one gets in an air terminal watching humanities enormous butts slowly moving by resembling more a source of nutrition then an expression of contentment, this one is a departure from the usual....
todski28almost 11 years agoBranch out
Have fun, I have enjoyed most of your poems, for me the setup worked, suspense can make the result all the sweeter.
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Personal Bio Notes: I was born in Belfast, passing through my dear mother's loins, and that is where I find most comfort, passing through with other women, not my mother. I survived through the years of Irish troubles and immigrated to the USA after various family tragedies...
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