All Comments on 'Instinct Awakened'

wonderful... I'm going to read this one several times

but I feel like a lot of what you're saying is getting lost in the format you've chosen to present it in and in the lack of more punctuation (and I'm not overly ocd about punctuating, but sometimes it really does help). Maybe my own preferences are standing in the way of appreciating the format more, but I am seeing some really powerful stuff that needs to stand out more. Still, it's mostly terrific writing. Thank you for the read.

It seems that this one, too, is is pulled out of shape by the page format. I guess the more visually structured or complex poems i write won't be posted on Lit.