All Comments on 'Jennifer and Julie Ch. 01'

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knuts1knuts1about 11 years ago
Can't wait for chapter 2!!

Very good start! can't wait for the next chapter. Very hot!

heilosmithrasheilosmithrasabout 11 years ago
great start

can't wait for chapter 2.....perhaps a little mother/daughter action?

AdjMicroGAdjMicroGabout 11 years agoAuthor
Rate and Comment!

Please rate and comment...this is my first story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Hot hot hot

Wonderful, hurry with chapter 2 and more soon

EroticWriter0826EroticWriter0826almost 11 years ago
More please

That was a good start to the story. A few grammatical/spelling errors near the end, but a good start to a great story. Can't wait to see where this goes.

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