by FinalStand
You are a great storyteller with a wicked sense of humor and mirth, Keep up the good work.
I really enjoy stories that have some background knowledge on a particular skill/subject (the details you poor into the re enactment scene). I ask truly enjoying this story and have more comments to make but I decided to comment here first.
aunt jill is gonna be riding the zane train at some point me thinks lol
Rio is going to do something and get busted in a big way and Zane will draw a line. She'll go over it deliberately and grow for it, realising that she is better off with Zane than without... atleast that's my estimation of events.
JC
... I have to agree with you. I figured she'd go totally nuts during Spring Break, or go in a paint ball shooting rampage in Mercy's home town at the start of summer. She has to do something both insane yet highly creative in its destructive potential.
And then she will have to deal with the fall out ...
And then she will see that Zane is still there for her even though he doesn't bail her out because, as you stated, she needs to grow from those outbursts, or she'll end up destroying herself one day.
I so have to get back to this story ... ugh.
Thanks and take care,
James aka FinalStand