All Comments on 'Business As Usual Ch. 01'

I love this start and they are a fun couple

Ok, this story I remember (or at least this chapter)...I read the other 2 today too. I just can't get by the fact that it's really confusing as to when this is happening. It's really hard to understand. I hope that from story to story there would be some sense of chronological time in his life. It's hard to follow bc you're trying to picture what point this is and you can't know. The characters are great and I really want to see more his and Elwin's life. Looking forward to more.

cannd