All Comments on 'The Consortium - Amarie Ch. 01'

Look forward to more chapters

I would definitely like you to continue this

Well done, really enjoyable read. Enjoyed the introduction and thought it very explanatory and definitely a good way to set up the storyline. I thought the sentences were fine to follow and not too many typos Looking forward to the next chapter. Thank you.

Since you seem to be working on a rich and detailed story, I'd like to see somewhat longer chapters. I felt I was just getting into it when this first installment ended.

This is just the first chapter but i can tell that it is going to be verry good.

I am looking foward to youre next chapter. ;)

Well written chapter. Would like for you to continue to see how you would expand on the story. Good work for first submission to lit!

especially because it seems Amarie wont be going through the seven hells.You know, like crawling on rice and been buried in coffin drawers, it's just not hot!

I hope it will be both, exciting plot and erotic. Thanks

...for all the feedback and encouragement. I am finishing up some classes so I will be able to focus more on writing throughout the summer. I have been working on some character development, research, and logistical details to incorporate into the next chapters. I will be filling the story line out over the next few days and will hopefully post around Sunday/Monday. I will be making chapters longer in the future!

Keep suggestions and advice coming... I really do appreciate it :-)

Also in the future, I may write more stories about The Consortium but following other characters. If there is a character I just happen to make in passing that you would be interested to follow in the future... let me know ;-D

I hope you don't plan to stop this story so soon, it's a great start!

Looking forward to the next installment :)

This is wonderful and fascinating. I really can't wait to read more .

You really have to.

*holds out her bowl with big brown eyes *

Very nice, but where is the rest of the story? I look forward to further chapters.

This story is an amazing start and all I can say is

More please

*holds out her bowl with big brown eyes *

As spearish said and so do I.