All Comments on 'Tentacles Ch. 05'

Of course you stopped there! Horribly well done, my dear. Very much like that Luke has grown up so fast and so well. Quite the ninja.

I LOVE YOUR WORK AND I HATE THAT THERE IS A CLIFF HANGER AND I HAVE TO GO TO WORK AND I NEED TO STOP GOING BACK AND RE-READING YOUR CHAPTERS TO FIGURE OUT WHO THE HELL THE HUNTERS ARE!!! SHOOT, SHOOT, SHOOT. Hey, could they be from the facility or from Sys' planet or even from where Dee is from? Or could it be some of the folks they helped were captured and tortured and gave up info? Hmmmm? I am so caught up in your work. LOL I don't want Sys to be dead. I don't want Dee to be dead, I want Luke to kick everyone's ass. I can't wait for your next installment. I do have to tell you, that I just watched Resident Evil and the tentacles in that were nothing like what you described. I got a whole different feeling with Dee's appendages. HA!

Goodness how sad! They're such a sweet couple ... this is a great story!