Their are a lot of dirty old men around to take care of your wife because you can't. Story not my thing, didn't find it erotic, just sick.
Why did you read it then you stupid prick?
ps - story was fine
to give you and your fans a score-got it
A woman (any woman) fucking herself with a wine bottle. Sorry Tony. I really don't find it erotic. Actually pretty gross if you ask me.1*
What part of "you have to read a story to know what's in it" don't you get? If you CAN know what is in a story without having to read it, that's pretty good indication that it is crap, written without effort, thought, logic, etc.
Sick bastard get some help! Also post in fetish because most of us are in fact not sick bastards!!!
I see nothing written by the author that suggests there is ANY degree of feeling between Hubby and Sweetie. Just a warm dildo and a cum-dump with an odd gray-fixation. If no main character can be identified-with, then a story fails catastrophically.
Contrary to the other comments, I actually thought it was pretty decent.. But then I'm into the whole younger woman/older man scenario.. A little short perhaps but I'm hoping you plan more chapters... From a literary pov Good use of paragraphs and construction. Some 'Authors' on here make my eyes bleed.. Refreshing then, to read something almost professional.
This writers username is "cuckoldtony". Think he's going to write about romance?
..and thank you for adding yet another reason to my hopeful wish, these pseudo-male cucks may get their own little topic - wimps´corner, i.e.
How about adding a small warning right at the top: caution...males stay out...
Notice you haven't written any material yourself EgoTrixi.... what a surprise.
Some of these narrow minded people ought to to read the description of the loving wives category.....keep writing. This is no place for bigots to spread their their bile.
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