All Comments on 'Deer Island'

by TxRad

Sort by:
  • 23 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Hot...Hot...HOT!

Perfect description of my fantasy redhead, every detail and so hot!

Rawmaster50Rawmaster50almost 11 years ago
Damn, way too short

This one could go on for several chapters and I would like to have you do that. But it is your story and you told enough of it to keep me interested. I had a few family members of the female persuasion that I remember fondly and regret my shyness at the time. Thanks for the trip down memory lane and the way I wish it had been. 5 stars

SwifthawkSwifthawkalmost 11 years ago
I have to agree with Rawmaster50...

The way you built up the characters I was looking forward to a lengthy, in depth story and was fairly disapointed when you ended it. But like he said, it's your story and I still gave it 5 stars. Great read and thanks for sharing!

TashtimTashtimalmost 11 years ago
Good story short ending

this was poised to be romantic blockbuster,the way u build yo characters was incredible,why did u have to end it?? was definately a good story,

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Great story

Always enjoy reading your stories with an east Texas flavor!

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 11 years ago
Nicely done

I would have like to have read more of their lives, perhaps how they lived together and enjoyed each other bodies giving each other pleasure for many years.

Thanks for the read...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
A Good Tale

well done, TR.

ansdguyansdguyalmost 11 years ago
Excellent story...

Wonderfully written, romantic and erotic and pretty much flawless. I would love to read more, but it doesn't look like it's in the cards.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Did enjoy that !

A delicious story of finally requited passion.

5*

For some mysterious reason my character seems to have disappeared from the Literotica web site.

I am usually known as Oleguy.

unicorn64unicorn64over 10 years ago

Yes one delicious story. I almost want to beg for more but it probably is out of the question. Still a most delicious story.

rightbankrightbankover 9 years ago
so much unfulfilled promise

such an abrupt ending

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
have to agree with others

this is less than half a story, a GOOD writer would never leave it like this they would bring it to a PROPER ending. two more three page chapters would finish it nicely.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Good story

I read it before and enjoyed it then. Just got through reading it all over again and still really like it. 5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Old Memories

In the late 1950's I was at Barksdale ABF and for a summer I had a House boat on Caddo Lake. This story brings back many memories of the people in that area.

The story was just as I would envision it happening in that part of the country. Very descriptive and well written. 5*

Aussie1951Aussie1951over 6 years ago
I agree far too short

I too thought the story would b a lot longer and finished too abruptly, ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

FullBlissFullBlissabout 5 years ago
Incest/taboo not usually my genre

Incest/taboo not usually my genre but, as usual, TXRad your ability to make characters relatable and the sex super hot surprises me! I truly love every story of yours that I have read, thanks so much for being an author!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
No babies?

That hurt this story.

Diecast1Diecast1over 2 years ago

I enjoyed the story, could have been longer. AAAA++++

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Another winner. It's a great story I enjoyed it very much. Good read it followed through you could feel yourself being on the boat on the island perfect.

Gene

Bigbubbamarine@gmail.com

KittyLover80KittyLover80almost 2 years ago

Great story. Brought back childhood memories. I grew up north of Shreveoprt an used to fish at Caddo Lake during HS.

goodshoes2goodshoes2over 1 year ago

This reminded me of something long, long ago, but will never come to fruition at my age or at this time in my life. Too bad.

5 stars, and a load of thanks for the memories.

Frankie1952Frankie19529 months ago

A really good story. I wish we had been privy to the sex they shared and surely they could have married and made babies.

Campus77Campus776 months ago

I love a good water story. Glad they ended up together.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous
userTxRad@TxRad
5936 Followers
75 year old guy that worked in the oil fields of Texas for 41 years and writes because he has to..... Nudist, loves the outdoors, ex stock car racer, likes to have fun... If you're not happy then you're doing something wrong...

SIMILAR Stories