All Comments on 'The Stranger'

Story doesn't work - it's just too unrealistic. In a setup like that, Tim is going to be fearing for his life. He'd lose his erection in short order, and scream his head off - he wouldn't just go with it. Readers live in the real world. If the story has elements that are that unrealistic, the fiction isn't upheld - the reader snaps back into the real world with an "oh please, this is rubbish" - you need to work on that. Make the scenario believable before you try anything else.

I thought it was believable. Of course he would go along with it if it were his fantasy and his gf set him up. I doubt he would scream his head off - It's what he wanted! Keep doing what your doing. I enjoyed it

That story got me harder then I have been in a while. I gave in to a man just one time in my life and wish I could enjoy it again, the feeling of his power over me and doing what I am told is outstanding. Thanks for the story.

..... Dude I don't even have words.

Put a fucking trigger warning on your shit, would you? Not everyone wants to read about disgusting rape.

Hate it!! That's rape!