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by HerSub1008

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MasterShadowsMasterShadowsalmost 11 years ago
My story

I love this story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Most enjoyable!

I too loved this story - thank you for sharing it with us and welcome to Literotica. I wish it had been a little longer because it seemed to run out so quickly but it was very good. Just one thing: if you are going to use foreign phrases, do try to get them absolutely perfect, even if it means looking them up; per say [sic] just will not do.

Apart from that, very well done. Please write more for us.

HerSub1008HerSub1008almost 11 years agoAuthor

There will definitely be more stories to come :)

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