This is a very exciting story of forbidden love /lust between a father and daughter. It also has an unexpected twist in it. Very enjoyable reading.
Wonderfully written!!! Painted a picture that would make anyones blood raise to the one hundred degree mark. Thank you for sharing,, my wife had great sexual encounters growing up,, and i love to hear about her family ones
I could not stop rubbing my pussy! Thank you for making me so wet.
Beautifully written and very exciting!
Thank you so much, Bucsgirl, for this wonderful story...You successfully managed to get my cock rock hard and throbbing...I had to rub it reading on your stroy...
A female writer who is able to get your cock hard, is worth reading
At first I felt it started too fast,but so perfectly executed it worked!! Very HOT,HOT idea!!I came HARD!!!!
I loved the idea that you did not mention the little darling's ag,leaving it to the reader to fantasize about how young and tender his fantasy could have been. There should be more like that. Everyone you read about is 18 or more, for obvious reasons. Brothers and Sisters should start enjoying each other much much younger
Finally a story that didn't get tired after the first paragraph.
That was fantastic, left me so horny and wet.
I agree leaving the age out made it more stimulating. The man stating he likes hearing about is wife's family ecperience's is very honest. I love learing what my sister did. Let's hear more like this!
This story was so very well written! Left me wet and waiting for more!
Interesting but lacks balance in construction.Daddy ain't playing fair!
The dialog was perfect, exactly what turns me on.
biggest cock hardon i had in a month
This story was great! Great job!!!
My daddy is too old now how I wish i could find another daddy one just like this one.
I didn't realize how hot this got me.... oh my.. i almost feel a little ashamed being so turned on by this...
What a wonderful hot fucking story. So well written and the surprise finding out it was her daddy was excellent. Thank you for you explicit discriptions of her feelings and passions. You were so explicit that you gave me the best hot and fucking hard prick I`ve had today. For those lady commenters who got so hot and and wet I`ve now got a hot and hard cock and I would be more than happy to fuck every one of them. I hope they cum back and reread their comments so they know of my offer. John P
Im sorry but there is no way on earth that this is normal..I read it thinking no way it cant possibly be about that. I will know better next time what is wrong with humans??/
I agree with WTF mate you fuckers have some seriously demented and fucked up issues go find a psychiatrist
I never thought I could be so turned on by something like this. Over the past couple days ive been introduced to stories about incest..and im so fucking horny..im about to go finger myself in the bathroom at work..wonderful work
AFTER READING SOME OF THE COMMENTS I:M AMAZED SOME PEOPLE THINK ITS DISGUSTING,ITS ONLY IN THE AUTHORS IMAGINATION I CHALLENGE ALL OF THEM 2 SWEAR THEY HAVE NEVER HAD ANY EROTIC THOUGHTS
Shameful, I must say, for choosing that topic. But what the hell, mine was two cousins screwing each other, and one was 8 so I can't say anything. While the idea is shameful, your choice of words are explicit and well-chosen. I admire your work (and you got a hot imagination) and hope to see more.
MMMMMMM! Hell yes! What a hot fucking story! I loved it. I thought my pussy would squirt just reading it. Love your fantasies. Keep writing!
that was fucking disgusting and wrong !!!!!wat is rong with u?!?!?! how can anyone get turned on by that?
When I saw this story, I was already Imagining every detail, that your story provides happening to me. With one different detail, MY AWSOME UNCLE is the man who is my lover, best friend, and he's MY Daddy!!! I loved it, not to rough and not to bland, PERFECT!!!!
wow...all of your stories are truly sexy...i don't know why they turn me on so much, but they do...they are very well written...it seems like almost by experience...which is harsh...but hot at the same time...if that is what you're into...
You're very talented and i really enjoyed reading it. It totally pulled me in.
Don't listen to what other say. It's education and an open mind and heart that will make someone understand this lifestyle.
i loves this so much! i bet that you could do a lot of different stories and still draw people in. very good point of view narrating!
as for those who say its disgusting, think about it. why do you read it if it sickens you? you have the choice not to read it yet you do. get over yourselves and do something positive, like comment on the writing.
if you dont like the thmes presented here, dont peruse this part of the site. you wont find anything you like here. you also wont find many people appreciative of your attitude towards these fictional works.
I was rather intruiged by the mellow subtones of incest, and i have constructed some basic analogies. The Father is like God, strong and caring; all following the ultimate desire to please him in whatever way possible. We, his people, are like the vagina, stretched by the task of following God's good rules every day.
This was an interesting piece. I liked the idea that she had to rely on her other senses on the deck, without her sight. It made it more sensual. Don't worry about the negative comments. If they didn't like stories like this, then they shouldn't have picked this category! One question though...who were the other people on the deck? Were they really there, or was that just in her mind?
God kills a kitten
At the thought that reading this shit story would actually arouse someone.
Certainly not a real man.
that was sick, it reminded me of a little girl getting raped. Your truly disgusting. I hope you rot in hell.
this story was amazing! it reminds me of my Master, He's my world!! we loved your story!!
Wow!! That was so damn fucking hot! I would love for it to have been me. The roughness combined with the gentleness of Daddy made me cum as I read it.
This storie is disgusting. its rape! siko. i dont know how you thought of somthing so sick
Leaves nothing to the imagination all the while enough to picture everything. Well written. Need a lot more of these types of stories.
Oh and one thing: for the previous comment who rated this sick...You are pretty sick yourself if you read this story and feel the need to leave a comment that you yourself were grossed out! Funny how sick people need to berate themselves openly!
just want to say in my defence that i did not enjoy this story and wanted to say it is sick, because it is disgusting. Hot, the previous comment, is obviously a rapest if they enjoy it.
i thought it was beautiful actually. Please don't worry about the negative comments. my Master treats his baby girl like that all the time, it never feels like rape to her. Keep writing!
I loved it. It made me cum, right at the end. I love my daddy too.
That was sick, sorry but just wrong...
If you don't like it why do you read these (incest) stories?
I personally enjoyed your story...I came very hard. What I think is funny is the fact that there are so many ppl who criticised your writing calling you a rapist, however...they are the ones who read the story. They are the ones who entered the incest catagory. So, if stories like this didnt turn them on...why enter THIS category? So, who is the real sick rapist here?
I can see why she loves her daddy. She's as sick as he is and the writer sounds as sick as both of them. Just another rape-them-they-really-like-it fantasy.
Good writing and story was pretty hot. Wish it was a little longer.
Your writing was good and the storyline is excellent. At the point where she discovers it's Daddy though, the scene should have gone further before retreating to her room...and at the point where she's having sex with daddy, it should have drawn out more...ended much too quickly...when the action starts, your details should be come more not less...keep writing...you obviously have a talent for it, but it needs more development.
a little bit sick to be honest but also sexy at the same time
I love the sick and sexy twist...I need to fuck myself now!
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