All Comments on 'Clear Instructions'

Rarely do I have to type a comment with one hand. Thank you.

Thank you for sharing your obvious talent for writing with us; this was quite superb.

Great piece of work. Thank you.

The comments are lovely and much appreciated. This is my first crack at writing BDSM, so I'm glad it's having the desired affect!

So, hot. Give us more.

I loved this one. I rarely leave comments but you have a superb talent for writing! Keep it up.

This: "she wanted it this way. She wanted him to tie her, to tease her, to make her body and mind uncomfortable. She hated it and loved hating it. Loved hating him. Loved hating the way Thomas, Sir peered into her soul and pulled out the things that put her most on edge and tamed her with them. Against her will. And totally in line with her desires." is without doubt one of the most succinct and perfect descriptions of what BDSM can be. And the shaving scene is one of the most erotic and imaginative things I've ever read.

I do have one minor editorial observation; early on there is a place where you say she moans against the gag, but I don't see where he gags her.

It flows in and out of thought and scene wonderfully, something I struggle with myself. Just a wonderful scene that makes me shiver for more.