All Comments on 'The Weekend'

by IrishHeart

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mh4912mh4912almost 11 years ago
Hopefully?

There will be more?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Ummm, this is the category were we like to read about rape fantasies ,they are healthy as long as the remain fantasies by the way. So where does this submissive stuff fit in. It's sad seeing this special category turning in a bdsm off branch.

By the way the lack of commas in your story made reading tiresome. You should fix that too.

dinkus36dinkus36almost 11 years ago
need????

More more more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
love it

'twould be a dream come true

OliviaBeaumontOliviaBeaumontalmost 11 years ago
:-)

Made me go weak at the knees.

Olivia

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
More?

More? As a man, I want more of Susan. I want her taken in public again. I want her pushed far beyond her limits ....

MacD7MacD7almost 11 years ago

Perfect reluctance story, well written, great idea, good execution, well done

GingerVyeGingerVyealmost 11 years ago
mmmm

Loved it, a perfect way to start my morning. I would have liked a physical description of Susan. I liked that you had plenty of dialog, that made it real.

The anticipation of what he may do after his meeting is delicious.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
wow...

so want to take a ferry ride...loved it cant wait for the rest of the w/e to start

hey GingerVye...where is my Soren???

IrishHeartIrishHeartalmost 11 years agoAuthor
Thank You

Thanks for the nice comments and criticism everyone.

I'm glad my first public effort is going down so well.

Part 2 to follow soon.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Give me more!

Brilliant!

I fantasize about my wife in this situation.

My wifes name? Susan!

What happens to her next?

ErotonautErotonautalmost 11 years ago
Excellent debut

A very nice opening chapter, with Susan neatly balanced on the tipping point between fear at her unexpected lack of control and a headfirst dive into this explosive new sexuality. As Simon indicates, Susan has the power: she can walk away at any point or give herself totally to him, whichever she desires. This could be the start of a very interesting relationship.

IrishHeartIrishHeartalmost 11 years agoAuthor
Thanks

Again thank you for the comments, part two coming very soon.

kurvy1kurvy1almost 11 years ago
Very Arousing

I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter...

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
category

your story belongs in erotic couplings more than in non-consent

shysuzyshysuzyover 3 years ago
Only just saw this

Oh wow I wish you would keep writing

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