by IrishHeart
Ummm, this is the category were we like to read about rape fantasies ,they are healthy as long as the remain fantasies by the way. So where does this submissive stuff fit in. It's sad seeing this special category turning in a bdsm off branch.
By the way the lack of commas in your story made reading tiresome. You should fix that too.
More? As a man, I want more of Susan. I want her taken in public again. I want her pushed far beyond her limits ....
Perfect reluctance story, well written, great idea, good execution, well done
Loved it, a perfect way to start my morning. I would have liked a physical description of Susan. I liked that you had plenty of dialog, that made it real.
The anticipation of what he may do after his meeting is delicious.
so want to take a ferry ride...loved it cant wait for the rest of the w/e to start
hey GingerVye...where is my Soren???
Thanks for the nice comments and criticism everyone.
I'm glad my first public effort is going down so well.
Part 2 to follow soon.
Brilliant!
I fantasize about my wife in this situation.
My wifes name? Susan!
What happens to her next?
A very nice opening chapter, with Susan neatly balanced on the tipping point between fear at her unexpected lack of control and a headfirst dive into this explosive new sexuality. As Simon indicates, Susan has the power: she can walk away at any point or give herself totally to him, whichever she desires. This could be the start of a very interesting relationship.
Again thank you for the comments, part two coming very soon.