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AngelineAngelinealmost 11 years ago
There's an unsettling tension in this poem,

a too good to be true quality, that I really like. The last line seems like something of an empty promise because life is never all perfect--and that odd ending following all these wonderful promises makes your poem, to me, rather special. Keep working on your writing: I think you have a talent for it. :-)

weepingangel88weepingangel88almost 11 years ago
Thank you

Sir, this is one of my VERY favorites... Speaks to a part of me that desperately needed to hear these words. Thank you...

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A sensual guy....more interested in saying hi than being rude...I can be dirty, I can be clean....chat with me and you will see what I mean....

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