All Comments on 'Fun with Cindy Ch. 04'

by coyote3k

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Sad

It's sad that this kind of abuse turns people on.

shyintxshyintxalmost 11 years ago

This asshole has no redeeming qualities what-so-ever . He is not a dom just a sick bastard.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

bleh

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
I agree

Cindy would be someone's daughter. This bastard deserves to be strung up by his balls, left to hang long enough for them to turn purple, then be cut down - by cutting off his package.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Hahaha

I found all 4 stories extremely funny, but unfortunately not arousing at all. Congratulations.

pheobecharmedpheobecharmedalmost 11 years ago

I very rarely comment if idont care for something. I read both noncon and bdsm this is noncon. Bdsm gives the sub all the power. She has no say what so ever in what's happening. I'm guessing given the choice she wouldleave. My advice move this to noncon it will be much better received.

pheobecharmedpheobecharmedalmost 11 years ago

Gnore that comment I thought Iwas on bdsm lol

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
This is beyond non-con.

And is about as wrong as pedophilia. That being said, it was an accurate depiction of an actual rape and none of the usual crap where the victim immediately becomes a submissive slut who only lives to cum. So for that I give you a 4/5.

MindGamesMasoMindGamesMasoalmost 11 years ago

More, please. Though, having hang ups about my own butt.. And bodily functions, those parts are just revolting. Brilliant. But revolting.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
snatched from the headlines

I'm no prude. I love the non-con section. But yeah, this crosses so many lines for me. It's the pure continued abuse of another human being - women being treated worse than an animal. That it actually happens makes it worse. We just saw how 3 young women in real life were held for 10 years as sex slaves. Some sickos cross the line from fantasy to reality. But for the life of me, why would anyone have this as a fantasy? It's got to be a deep seated hatred of women.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
uneasy

When I heard the reports from Cleveland about birthday cakes marking abduction day, I immediately thought of this story. It is sitting very badly at the moment.

Very unnerved by it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Cleveland

Sorry, coyote3k, but perhaps this story should retire.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Your bio says you have an interest in bdsm and by the story it is obvious you have some knowledge in the subject. You have solid writing skills. Why don't you craft a bdsm story without the noncon element? I think you could create strong scenes people would respond to positively. You just need the right story to place them in.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Kill On Sight

You have written an excellent story that gives good insight into the mind of someone who needs to be killed or castrated on sight. I find it very interesting for that reason. I'm trying to write a story with a sexually abusive villain and this is helping me a lot. Since I have difficulty comprehending this kind of behavior, I've been having a lot of difficulty with getting this character right.

So thanks. This is very helpful. I'm quite serious, thanks for your help, this is brilliant.

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I've been reading bdsm for a long time. I have some ideas of my own and have started writing them. I love to get feedback, feel free to email me at coyote3k at yahoo.com Literitica won't post some of my new stuff, I understand that. You can read it at thefetlibrary. com

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