All Comments on 'Our Cabin Experience'

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Independent_ArticleIndependent_Articlealmost 11 years ago
Rather bland

Not much of a story - rather cliched in fact.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
I absolutely HATE ...

... stories where the would-be writer tries to pretend that the Reader is/was part of the action!!

The Reader KNOWS that he/she was not and so therefore there is zilch believability, which means that the supposed story is just a bunch of words!!

TLion63TLion63almost 11 years agoAuthor
critique

Just learning

Will keep that in mind in the future

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