All Comments on 'My Twentieth Birthday'

I came so hard while reading this

Keep writing , you did good. The story had a good start & finish. The story in between was great. Thanks

My first erotica story I'm ever reading on here and I loved every minute!!

the gay crap killed the story keep the gay shit out of the incest area that is why they have a seperate area for it.

That was incredibly well written. kept me hard throughout, and loved every moment of it, and, although i'm not into the gay stuff, I still thought it was well done, and not over bearing.!!!

This was a great read. The plot sucked me in and the sex kept me reading. The "gay stuff" as the others have affectionately termed it did NOT take away from the story in my mind. This was a pleasure to read.