All Comments on 'A Night to Remember'

I challenge all commenters to leave a name identifying themselves! This grammar-bashing is just rude, IMHO. Ms. Southern Bell, I liked your story. I think it was a bit brief, but a good story, nonetheless. Keep Writing!

Thank you. This was my very first attempt. I know it was brief, but I didn't want to overdo it, you know?

It was very nice hot n sexual for ur first passage .. I can't wait to what elese u have In store

a good first effort! Nice read, good pace. Good luck with your future endevors.