All Comments on 'Step-Stories: Happy Birthday Ch. 01'

I love your story, although I wish it was a longer first chapter. It had a very nice flow to it, and no spelling errors, or misused words.

Thanks, Tony

Nice writing with good stroke value. Pl continue the escapades...

I found your first story to be very erotic. It flowed well from the opening and continued throughout. I really appreciate when authors take the time to give the tiny details of the simple touch that occurs between two people; it's like your there in the room watching these two lovers as they begin their erotic journey.

Thank you for sharing your writing with the literotica community, and please continue this story and sharing the many I'm sure you have in imagination.

Best Regards,

Blueyes005

what a wonderful and well written story. you could feel the tension and passion between them. I was sad when it was over, because it was that good. keep up the good work.

TOO SOON, give us some background on these people. Then tell us the story.Thanks for the hard on .................................LAROC

OH! YA ! BY THE WAY WHAT HAPPEN TO DAD........................LAROC

All you're doing is being an annoying twit posting all of that shit on different stories comment sections. Don't you know what the forum is for? Quit being a fucking troll.

Teens do not need a hesitant tease, especially from a taboo older woman. Masterfully crafted in content and mechanics.

Too easy. What was the conflict?