All Comments on 'Fucking the Receptionist'

Therefore this 'story' has absolutely zero believability and is complete and total crap!!

If I could vote anything that would Register, but be LESS than 1* I would do so.

Since I can't you get 1* which is much more than your 'story' merits!!

Please don't write in the second person. Write in the first person, from the point of view of the boss. Write in the third person, from the point of view of the fly on the wall. Don't put me in the story. The scene was good, albeit short. I just couldn't enjoy it because of the POV of the story. Sorry.