All Comments on 'That first touch'

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erectus123erectus123almost 11 years ago
well done

a few weak lines, i.e."my honey cave was pure."

but very nice all in all

does anyone refer to a vagina as a honey cave?

Ashesh9Ashesh9almost 11 years ago
How about "cavern" or " love tunnel" ,

Erectus ?!?

kirkanthonykirkanthonyover 9 years ago
virginity

your feeling of your first time was intimate yet open

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