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dontblink88dontblink88almost 11 years ago
Lovely

Very moving, thank you Sir!

erectus123erectus123almost 11 years ago
exceptionally well done

you humanized the light house making in symbolic for much more. the poem develops nicely with colorful language and imagery and works to a strong conclusion although the last line might be smoother. Very exceptional work! Could go but will be brief...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Beautiful.. Thank you for sharing.

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