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How to Write Good Sex Scenes

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by Gabriel Orr04/15/05

Thank bloody goodness!

*bows* I'm currently working on my first submission to this site, and though I am extremely proud of the story itself I find myself simply unable to write the intimate scenes between the important characters. This answered some of the questions that I hadn't quite thought of yet! Thanks much!

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by Anonymous09/10/05

Fantastic!

Working on trying to write some teen fantasy stories, and this article helped greatly. I didn't even think about making several drafts/edits! Figures, I was only thinking about the sex.

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by Natassja04/20/06

wow thanks

wow, thanks! It's really gonna help me elaborate my stories.

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Thank You!

This kind of advice is exactly what I needed. Thank you so much!

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by Xie_Lei11/07/08

Thanks

This will help my writing immensely.

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by Transverse05/20/09

Nice

Very informative and sure to help a lot of people on this site write better stories. Sex scenes are key to most stories on the site, and writing good ones can make or break an author- it's good that you posted this to help guide new ones. It's nice to know that I'm not the only one out there who wants to help improve Literotica, because that's honestly how I feel sometimes. Nice Job.

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by diggypop11/11/10

Good ideas

Even with rape, pacing is important. A careful building of tranquility, suddenly shattered by a brutal attack, is extremely effective. I would say always try to build a mood, otherwise the reader remains detached.

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