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erectus123erectus123almost 11 years ago
nice fantasy poem

more details might take from the imagination

greenmountaineergreenmountaineeralmost 11 years ago

This has a haunting quality to it. The reader can do a lot with it.

I was confused by the second line in stanza seven. Not sure about "audible grins."

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