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Couples Weekend at the Resort

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by Anonymous05/19/13

I'm very hard.

Great story. Loved it. Nothing like a little new nookie. I need some friends like that. This is a real masturbation story or a good prelude to a fuck if you are not alone.

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by Anonymous05/20/13

work on your intro

Almost didn't get to the good stuff - just starting out with the old married for 7 years crap - it's such a turn off. Take a look at any good book, and setting the stage with sterile intro's ain't it. Start it off with girlfriend crying on wifey's shoulder - wifey comforting as she hears what a bastard he was; start out with hubby talking about those wonderful double D's, and how he'd like to look/feel/titty fuck them. Turn the intro INTO your story, not just some stray words that semi explain what we should be thinking.

After that it gets hot, great job.

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by cabanaz05/20/13

Awesome

Deserves a sequel.

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by louise_lloyd06/26/13

Very Erotic

What a wonderful erotic fantasy ..... a wild weekend with open sexual activity.

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