All Comments on 'Couples Weekend at the Resort'

by dbconor

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
I'm very hard.

Great story. Loved it. Nothing like a little new nookie. I need some friends like that. This is a real masturbation story or a good prelude to a fuck if you are not alone.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
work on your intro

Almost didn't get to the good stuff - just starting out with the old married for 7 years crap - it's such a turn off. Take a look at any good book, and setting the stage with sterile intro's ain't it. Start it off with girlfriend crying on wifey's shoulder - wifey comforting as she hears what a bastard he was; start out with hubby talking about those wonderful double D's, and how he'd like to look/feel/titty fuck them. Turn the intro INTO your story, not just some stray words that semi explain what we should be thinking.

After that it gets hot, great job.

cabanazcabanazalmost 11 years ago
Awesome

Deserves a sequel.

louise_lloydlouise_lloydalmost 11 years ago
Very Erotic

What a wonderful erotic fantasy ..... a wild weekend with open sexual activity.

SilverHotwifeSilverHotwifeover 3 years ago
Fantastic fantasy

A very good start to an amazing weekend.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

I second the hard on. Good for solo action or a group activity. Definitely want to share this scenario with others.

ProfWernerProfWerner4 months ago

Absolute crap....... pass. Lots of other better writers.

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