All Comments on 'Electrical Attraction Ch. 03'

Can't wait to read more soon.

I love this series! Please continue

Write more please

if your story was a wine by this time i am already tipsy but i don`t mind being intoxicated because you made me happy.tnx author, hope for the next chapter soon.(cinder)

I thought that Jess had broken ribs, face trauma, and serious shoulder wounds? I don't really think there would be so much slamming into each other, pulling, and bending on Jess' part. That was the only distracting part of the story. Otherwise... Hot! Yum.

Please continue the story!!! I love it so far!!

Write more. I love this story!!!:)

"I thought that Jess had broken ribs, face trauma, and serious shoulder wounds? I don't really think there would be so much slamming into each other, pulling, and bending on Jess' part. That was the only distracting part of the story. Otherwise... Hot! Yum."

I agree with this. Nice enough story, but they don't know anything about each other. A little more plot before they fall in love, please.

Enjoying the story, the romance and the growing love between the two. There are still avenues that can be lovingly explored. I hope you continue.

Very lovely story, please write more.

We need more. Like someone else said there's a lot of avenues to be lovingly explored with these two. Great story though.

This story has the potential for at least six more chapters.

These are a good base to start. There is so much more you could add to this. Don't stop now. Keep going. I enjoyed reading this.