All Comments on 'Wanted: A Story'

Monster cocks and DDs. Ugh. Stories like this make me wonder why I even look at this site.

It used to be 90% of the stories are badly-written and completely unarousing.

Now it's 99%. Like this one.

... try to make out that the Reader is/was a participant.

Because the Reader KNOWS that he/she was not there/did NOT take part there is absolutely zero believability in the story and it is therefore a complete waste of time bothering to read it!!

1*, because it is the lowest that I can give that will Register!

Hey guys, it's a fantasy. Writing in the second person allows the reader to enter the fantasy - like virtual reality in words. It works fine for me - right down to the mouth feel of cock, and cum running down the throat.

Looks well written and thought out to me. As for the arousing part, I don't know cause I'm not turned on by BBC and BDSM. And I was looking for POV from a nan's perspective.

I only skim read it but the language usage appears good. No blatant grammar mistakes. Hell, it even pokes fun at the "overly straightforward" stories in the beginning.

I find the last paragraph a little disturbing though. If I was the "You", I would prefer to be back to checking emails after reading the story, maybe having realising how wet I must've been while I was reading and that now I have to cleanup my chair and jeans or whatever. Gives me a little comfort.