All Comments on 'Twisted Love Ch. 03'

Before anyone else complains about the shortness of this chapter; I uploaded them all at once but I guess it takes time for them to get approved. I promise Chapter 4 will be longer and more than make up for the long wait. Just please be patient with the uploading system :). Enjoy!

Love your stories! Don't worry about the lenght since you uptading everyday ;)

This is very good. I like that you're giving them a chance to get to know each other and develop a relationship. I look forward to seeing where you're going with their story.

Don't let the complaints about short chapters bother you. A well-written short chapter is far better than a mediocre longer submission.

Your writing is impressive.

Five.

Thank you all for understanding :)

I don't mean any harm about stating the chapters were short. The length doesn't bother me as long as the story is good.

I love these kind of stories and I'm eager to read what happens next.

I absolutely love your strories :)

They are so sweet, I love them!

I am loving these two already and the pace you're taking with this story.

The way I see there a post everyday and that's satisfy me just fine plus it's well written and thought our so I have no problems at all 5 start kudos

the pace of this story is maddening because of the short chapters but well worth the wait. I am loving them and can't wait to get into the deeper part of them as they discover each other.

I do hope that Lucas is really as nice as he seems.

I love the pace..........SLOW BURN. I am not even mad that the chapters are short. Well done. 5 *****! You are now on my fave list.

I am so loving this story. I should be focusing on eating my lunch, but instead I am reading...

I keep checking for the next chapter. This pace is killing me! I need more. Awesome job :)

Thank you guys... I hope the next chapter lives up to your expectations.

great work can't wait for the next chapter

Ahhh I'm so hooked lol!! There's something really hot about tattooists & I'm glad that you've wrote a story about them (or one of them lol) and I love the fact that you mentioned Deftones!! I'm a big fan of them, so extra brownie points to you :-) But could just make your chapters a tiny bit longer??

Soft, you are a very beautiful woman, I love the story so far, keep it up, please

whyyyy are u doing this too me >.< ;l i need more

I need to be honest I know beauty is only skin deep but at 240 lbs 40 DDD breast size I don't see this love story happening

I used to believe the same thing. I think we've all been brainwashed to believe that hot guys will only want skinny women and even vice versa. Ive seen many good looking men who prefer women over the mark of 300lbs. and not just for their sizes. I wrote this to undo all that negative brainwashing. Im not sure if I mentioned this previously but Dale, the man in my Southern Tide story was real. He lost his wife and son and found me attractive...and I used my body as a model or Cat in the story. So you never know who will find you beautiful Some look beyond what you look like and choose to see the character beneath.

I have a friend I know, she's white though and very heavy set, her husband is so cute and in fairly good shape. So it can happen. Not often, but it can happen.