by Thesexfairy
your story overall is good but for me personally calling some on stupid or idiot is a complete turn off. If that's your thing great and there's the 1st amendment but I go cold, cold cold cold there's not coming back from it.
I like it don't listen to first comment I thought it was hot...if you get turned off by stupid or idiot you are too sensitive to be reading stories in BDSM section
I loved the way you started the story! I want to read more, if you will please write more. The slave acts as if she wants to be punished and the master knows it. Wow! I was getting hot just reading this! ;)