All Comments on 'FAWC 1: Curse of "The Bitch"'

Wasn't expecting to find something close to an epic. Fun, involving read!

I actually read this twice (the only FAWC story I've done that with), just to see if I was being unduly harsh in my first impression. I don't think I was. On the plus side, some of the sex scenes themselves , dialogue notwithstanding, were mildly erotic.

But it was the plot that did for me, sorry...

...then around the middle of the 3rd Lit page, it started getting a little too fantastical. Enjoyed some of the turns of phrase and a few other things, but overall, not quite there.

Very involved story (perhaps too involved?) I liked it, though it felt a bit jarring at times. Great effort!

This story was submitted by Saxon_Hart. Well done, Sax!

That was a fun read. Thanks!

Cog

I was on the edge of my seat the whole time!

believe it or not. TK U MLJ LV NV

Damn good little tale.

I'm glad PatientLee pointed me to this story. I don't think I've seen a more gripping and yet erotic story anywhere. I'm off to read more of your works.

Really good story. Little over the top but what the hell, I would want all of those hot women myself!

Where they warn if the erection lasts four hours or more to seek medical help immediately because serious damage can result? I just knew some redneck would only hear the part about four hours and think two would give him eight hours of wood. So this was fun, it was redneck women who gave him two. Seems by some of the comments that there are still folks out there who can't take a fucking joke. LMFAO. Signed: BTW