by muixenc
But I like it. Actually, it is nice you are taking your time building up the characters and story. Anticipation is always a large part of the fun. I'm feeling a bit like Mel, all nervous and eager to know more about Reg.
Thank you once again for bringing us this marvellous story.
I'm liking where all of this is going so far, so please keep it up :)
~shysubmissivegirl~
I check everyday twice a day! When's number 6 coming out???
it's a great story, i seriously can't wait for part 6 and the next part and the next one and so on :)
This is very good. Great characterization, good job capturing Mel's uncertainty, and I love Reg's attitude. He had just the right amount of sternness and gentleness. Please do write more of them; you can’t just leave us like this!
I need more oh such much more.....LOL.Leaving it completely at a cliff was the worst but also made my imagination jump in. I cant wait for the next chapter. Dont take so long ;-) ...