All Comments on 'Sexy You Want'

poem, sexy and covers all the bases,

"So please

Be brave

Let's misbehave" says it well and all---

the final lines

"Together

Forever

Me and you." might be cut, why? because it makes the poem less erotic, less sexy and more personal and naive. just my take. Perhaps I err but in my experience almost nothing erotic can last forever except youthful hopes and wishes and memories....

Great one.