All Comments on 'A Day in the Life of a Slave'

The only negative remark I have is the word 'slave' should not be capitalized. I like the mention of and the worshipping of his Mistress's footwear. This is usually overlooked by most authors.

Very nice, I enjoyed this quite a bit. I like the dialog and the discriptions (like of her thoughts, her body, etc.). I wouldn't have minded it being a little longer but that's not really a complaint, it's just that I felt like it was good enough to keep going. All in all a very sexy story and I hope you keep writing.

Very erotic...reading some of these bdsm stories I often wonder how many of them are based on real experiences...keep it up!

Love the way you describe the sexual buildup from the moment she opens the door to when he's ordered to lick her shoes...:-)