All Comments on 'A Country Vicar'

by MattblackUK

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Excellent

Enjoyed the story although the topic is touchy. Nicely done.

doodlesdaddoodlesdadalmost 11 years ago
incomplete

This reads like the first chapter of a much longer story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Dan is used where Simon is appropriate

Dan got himself another drink before replying. "The thing is Dan, I have a degree in Psychology. I practised as a psychologist for several years, but I'd always wanted to own and run a country pub. And so, with the help of my parents with some financial support, Sue and I bought the Village Arms and we were lucky enough to make a go of it."

MattblackUKMattblackUKalmost 11 years agoAuthor
It was a very short story written for a competition

This was why it was so sparsely written.

Turn it into a longer piece? Thanks for the idea!

Sid0604Sid0604almost 11 years ago
I enjoyed it...

Thanks again Matt. I enjoyed reading this story. Although this is a good story by itself, I hope there's a Part 2.

betrayedbylovebetrayedbylovealmost 11 years ago
Great Tale

But it begs to be continued. Go for it Matt.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Yes a Part 2

This was interesting and a part 2 would be nice.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Do some of the critics even read the stories they comment on

Not much of a story realy, though well written. Certainly not erotic, but fag cuck shit? Shit could be a matter of opinion but there was nothing in the story to suggest any of the characters were gay or that anybody had been cuckolded, in fact there was no sex in the story a all.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
fag cuck shit?

When I read these guys screaming fag cuck shit my reaction is the guilty dog barks first. But here? Really? The main character isn't even married is he? Perhaps mr. fagcuckshit meant to reply to another story?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
I really like this, please continue!

The lead character is a fascinating person. I'd love to know more about his daily life and the joys of his duties... seems like there's much to be examined with his relationship towards both parents, too. I hope you post more, yes? I'm hooked!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
good one5 *

Anonymous of 3/26/17 should stop readying decent stories. His/her rage is so evident, it being the sign of very unhappy person.

ag2507ag2507over 5 years ago
With all due respect...

Somewhat unfinished

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

Don't understand what this story is doing on "Literotica"ZLH

MattblackUKMattblackUKabout 5 years agoAuthor
Anon Said: Don't understand what this story is doing on "Literotica"ZLH

Dear Anon, it seems that you have failed to realise that you have wandered off into the Non-Erotic section of Litreotica, where you will find stories that are non-erotic.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Best by far

Thanks

Boyd PercyBoyd Percyalmost 4 years ago

Good beginning! Hope you write a follow-up.

5

NitpicNitpicabout 3 years ago
Not

Not bad,as the makings of a good story to follow.

Frank66Frank66over 2 years ago

Um, something missing here....... ah yes, the bleepin' STORY! Hardly qualifies for a decent prologue. At least, in length- the content was great.

ChopinesqueChopinesqueabout 2 years ago

It's a really good introduction ...

NitpicNitpicabout 2 years ago
Left

Left like this it is a nothing story,needs more.

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