All Comments on 'Winter Change'

by drinksonme

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Weak writing killed an interesting story

I am not one to comment about spelling and grammar, but it was distracting in this story. Nice idea, but no "connection" between the couples other than there were vacationing in the same place and drunk. Not too sexy, just sex.

IFAFILHGIFAFILHGalmost 3 years ago

I'm all for wife sharing and swapping.. love interracial..BUT keep the husband and wife together so they can enjoy each others erotic moments. this author has one story and fucked it up...I suggest a republish doing it correctly with them staying in the same room

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