All Comments on 'A Almost Perfect Awakening Ch. 33'

This one leaves us a little frightened, curious and excited. Great job best one yet. I find the chapters too short most of the time but thats more than made up for by the number of them. I'm sure someone will get pregnant though because only way for them to be safe is the end of cycle I think and yet no period? If Lynn is 19 why does she need parents to be on the pill? She can take in herself and her sister even Larrys sister and get set up. Ok I am excited time to read on good work

but the deepening plot is very welcome as well.

Well written, my first job was at an A&W just like that, man you brought back all sorts of memories, and as always, the description of the sex is superb.

Wow! Anxious to see who the "watched" is!