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jpb531jpb531almost 11 years ago
Interesting

I was wondering how the dart situation was going to resolve itself. Very much looking forward to the next chapter.

katgoddess1katgoddess1over 10 years ago
Oh wow

This chapter was short and sweet. I am so glad to see Saburo meet a suitable end. Please write more soon! This has been a fabulous story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
:D

The brief language lessons and bits of historical background are great, and the story itself has yet to disappoint me. I like the characters, and I've enjoyed reading very much; needless to say, I await the next chapter with excitement. :D

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
please write more

The title says it all. Your writing style and imagination are superb but I feel like I was left hanging a bit. Please write more of this story and write more in general, because you're good.

Hubbys_PrincessHubbys_Princessabout 10 years ago
more please?

I hope you continue this as it's really good. I have found your work extremely enjoyable to read.

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