by zoelikesjam
Great 1st submission, so brilliantly sexually described, made me very hungry and not for picnic food ;-)
Crackingly erotic first story...in a series? Could be, and ought to be...loved it!
Thankyou so much for your feedback, I am chuffed to fid you enjoyed it. It is actually part of my novel I am writing, but I might consider making it into a series if you think I should! Thanks again x
Great story - good balance of romance & lust. The description of both actions & emotions and the flow of speech between Leith & Storm is easy to read, and makes for an enjoyable story. A great first submission - keep writing!!!
that was a brilliant read..jst the perfect balance..you shld write more :)
Had an authentic feeling and I could imagine it as it was happening. More please zoe!