All Comments on 'Winterthur Love'

by zoelikesjam

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William79William79over 10 years ago
great

Great 1st submission, so brilliantly sexually described, made me very hungry and not for picnic food ;-)

josephstevensjosephstevensover 10 years ago
Very Good Start!

Crackingly erotic first story...in a series? Could be, and ought to be...loved it!

zoelikesjamzoelikesjamover 10 years agoAuthor
Thank you!

Thankyou so much for your feedback, I am chuffed to fid you enjoyed it. It is actually part of my novel I am writing, but I might consider making it into a series if you think I should! Thanks again x

DanFSDanFSover 10 years ago
A great first submission - keep writing!!!

Great story - good balance of romance & lust. The description of both actions & emotions and the flow of speech between Leith & Storm is easy to read, and makes for an enjoyable story. A great first submission - keep writing!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

that was a brilliant read..jst the perfect balance..you shld write more :)

VandalayukVandalayukover 10 years ago
Enjoyed.....

Had an authentic feeling and I could imagine it as it was happening. More please zoe!

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I am exploring my submissive side, and need some help ;) so if anyone is willing...I have just discovered the joys of SRP and having much fun joining in with some much needed filth!

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