Your scoring system assumes too much. There should at least be a Zero, but preferably a few minus levels as well..
There is no plot at all and the content is ungrammatical. The writer obviously is unaware that the verbs "to Lie" and "to Lay" are quite different for example.
This jumped off the page fairly early in the entry, which is why I have singled it out. Having seen it I knew there would be worse to come.
I assume this to be an adult site and find it ironic that there are entries such as this which would shame a fourteen year old schoolboy!
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