by JayDavid
The story; was well presented and an enjoyable read. Unfortunately, I felt like it needed something more; something that would make it a really good read. I’m not talking about more detailed sex.
That’s just my humble opinion.
A very nice story that draws you to care for the characters. It also made me remember the first time I saw a nude woman. A few years before the character. Also remembering the first times I surfed for porn in the early 90's using AOL.