All Comments on 'Dinner and More'

I find myself wishing that the story was a little longer. More drawn out with more of a build-up. As it is it feels more like an outline than a story.

Otherwise not badly written.

5 Stars, but this really should be in Erotic Couplings. No hubby/wifey mentioned, as LTW said.

No mention of a husband or family..so it would appear that we have two adults meeting and having an evening together....

This is my first time posting a story - sorry I posted to the wrong category